It doesn't really look off. I can't put my finger on it. *Sniiiiiiiff sniff sniff*
Do I really have to dump everything, scrub it out, and start over? Ugh.
No. I don't think the problem is over here. *Sniff* And I don't think the problem is over here. *Sniff sniff* But when I look at the whole thing, something just isn't right.
*SNIFF sniff sniff sniff Sniiiiiiiiiff* Oh my god I think I'm getting lightheaded from all this inhaling. And yet I can't figure out what I need to do with this chapter!
What is wrong, what is wrong. Hmm...
Maybe I should reorganize. I dunno. *Clink clank clunk jingle shuffle shuffle*
*SNIFF Sniff Sniff* I don't think the problem is here.
Is this the problem? *Snifff* Is this the problem? *Sniff sniff* Ok if this area is fine, why do I not like it? Maybe it is all in my head? *Sniff sniff sniff* Gah I hate revising!
I can't bear to even look at any of this! I just wanna close it up and order a pizza.